Comparison - head shapes (CSI:NY)

[sexycazzy]

Title: Two Detectives Take Two
Artist: sexycazzy
Rating: PG
Fandom: CSI:NY
Characters/Pairings: Don Flack & Mac Taylor
Content Notes: digital drawing - not for the DW Interests challenge but to show the comparison between the original drawing and this one with the faces. Still not satisfied with the eyes, eyebrows & mouth but more confident in drawing the head shapes, so many thanks to everyone who has given me suggestions on my last post - I really appreciate it very much!


This is my orginal digital with the awful faces!


This is the comparison drawing with better head shapes

Comments

[goss]

Glad the vids were helpful! I can definitely see the improved proportions in the facial features. :)

[sexycazzy]

Thanks! They are not perfect, but I'm getting there! Will have a look at the other video for other parts of the face.

Thank you again for sharing the useful links, I really appreciate it! :-D

[mific]

Go you! That video was very useful - I've just watched it as well. :)

[sexycazzy]

Thanks :-)

[mekare]

Hey, cool that you posted the two versions together! It's really inspiring to see someone put the effort in and improve as well as show a version you aren't quite happy with.
I agree with the others that the poses are pretty good (they look relaxed, especially their arms) and the faces (especially on the right) look a lot better. Keep up the good work.

[sexycazzy]

Thanks! :-D